Griselda Mercado
English 250B
Blog #3
1. The most helpful thing about the peer response session, was that I got to get feed back on my essay, I have an idea of what parts of my essay I need to rephrase, and which parts don’t make sense.
2. The least helpful part of the peer response session was that we couldn’t actually talk to each other, we just wrote what we thought, but we didn’t say it out loud.
3. I am going to rephrase the wording in my 2nd paragraph, and add a few things to my introduction to make sure all the things I wrote are my ideas and the ones that I got from her, I gave her the credit. I have to EXPLAIN my examples, and say why they relate to my point.
4. I went to office hours, and I will read my essay out loud various times to see where it sounds awkward, and I’m going to ask my brother to read it to see if it makes sense.
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