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Directions/Description-
Please write a response to the questions below- be sure to number them on
your blog (For example, 2a, 2b, etc.)
- Read over your peers’
comments and annotations
- Review the expectations of
the essay (minimum requirements) and determine if you have met all the
minimum requirements.
- Did your peers guess your
thesis correctly? Yes/No Yes my peers understood my thesis.
- Did you peers believe
your thesis is an arguable one?
Yes/No Yes they did.
- What, if any, revisions
do you think you need to make to your thesis based upon the annotations
and comments your peers made? Explain. If you don’t think you need to
revise your thesis, explain why not. I need to rephrase my thesis so it
is clearer, and I have to make sure that I can prove my points.
- Choose TWO comments from
your peers that you believe are the most helpful to you. Then explain
how you will use these comments to help you revise your essay. Indicate the name of the person who
made that comment in parenthesis.
- Comment 1: The strongest
part of this essay is the points…(Susie Amaya) This will help me revise
my essay, because now I know I only have one topic per paragraph.
- Your response: How will
you use this comment in your revision?
- Comment 2: Yes but can be
developed more to be strong (Erick Gatchalian)
- Your response: How will
you use this comment in your revision? I have to develop my analysis
more for it to be good.
- Are there any other
important ideas you have about how you can improve your essay? Explain. Make
sure that the order that I put the things in my thesis are the same as
the order in my body paragraphs.
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